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Reply to "Guyanese homemade eggnog"

antabanta posted:

Sample. Feel free to critique.

  "Camoudie! Snake! Camoudie!"
  "Where?

The story makes the readers who witnessed these events remember everything; it was very serious and scary. The ending with everyone feasting on curried goat, and the last humorous paragraph add a perfect balance to the seriousness.  

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